this is the outline that you did before but i made some changes to please use this one to write the body paragraph.i need you to write the 3 body paragraph according to the outline. the number of words for every paragraph is 250-300.my instructor comment was that i need a better evidence for the first sub point in body 1. and she said the its better to change the type of industry into another one.please make the changes i mentioned above.structure of body paragraph:1- introduce the sub point2- write two or three connecting sentence3- introduce the evidence4- write the responses5- write the concluding sentence (it should be one sentence).i attached another file about the body paragraph to help you see the structure further.
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