I need this paper rewritten with the following changes madebelow is what the teacher wrote to me. This assignment had to be an authentic made up story Rumeal, first and foremost, your analysis of Hemingway’s story is a plagiarized version of this internet source: https://www.thoughtco.com/hills-like-white-elephants-analysis-2990497. If you plagiarize on your final writing assignment, you will fail the course. In terms of your story, please consider the following in your final draft: 1. Setting: Let’s try to use some sensory language to help the audience see/hear/feel and experience the fictional world you are creating. Try using sights, sounds, smells, and other physical feelings to help the audience enter this world with your character. In trying to stick with Hemingway’s style, you don’t need to go overboard, but a brush stroke or two here and there will go along way. 2. Characteriztion: let’s try to give the characters some unique details that help them come to life on the page. What do they look and sound like? Again, just a well placed detail or two. 3. Plot: Right now the rising action, climax, and resolution feel rushed, like you got to the end and pushed your way through. I think you can let the tension and suspense build for another few moments before closing the story down. 4.It’s great to see you using dialogue, but the punctuation needs work. Look here for a little help and guidance: https://www.thebalance.com/punctuating-dialogue-properly-in-fiction-writing-1277721
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