Video describing purpose of survey for wellness program

I am looking for a creative editor to improve style, flow and grammar of this video script to appeal to corporate office workers in their 30ties. I need to create engagement for 6 minutes video by converting the content to interesting story using words appealing to my audience. Please improve the start of the script. I like the style of writer who reviewed my first video ID: 250291 or my second video ID: 28679. The text is not overly technical and it needs to be re-written in semi-formal engaging style. Please unleash your creativity and make the text approachable. If it is unclear to you it means it will be unclear for the audience. Thank you Tony

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