I already have an essay that Im gonna attach the file and you can download it. It was first Draft and final draft is due 15th. My professor put comments and critics,you are gonna see in that file and that is how you have to edit my paper.
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Added on 09.02.2015 11:38
Here is the file attached(my essay with my professors comments and critics) below that essay there is a comment too.
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Added on 09.02.2015 12:01
Here are some things that professor expects from me-
PURPOSE AND AUDIENCE—Effectively and insightfully develops a thesis that is creative, specific, complex and arguable. Demonstrates an excellent awareness of audience, with tone and formality/informality appropriate to the purpose.
DEVELOPMENT AND SUPPORT—Incorporates evidence with excellent focus and reasoned explanation. Adequately cites evidence with appropriate attribution. Some minor errors in citation mechanics are apparent. The writer uses sources effectively. Quotations are integrated into sentences, and their relevance is adequately explained. Demonstrates outstanding skill in the elements of summary, paraphrase and quotations.
ORGANIZATION:CLARITY AND COHESION OF STRUCTURE—- sustains a very well organized, highly focused essay, connecting ideas smoothly and logically, demonstrates very clear coherence and progression. The introduction, body and conclusion are very effectively structured and unified, with a clear sense of resolution.
MECHANICS AND STYLE—exhibits skillful use of language, using generally appropriate vocabulary, with some variety in sentence structure. Voice and style are competent. Reflects thorough attention to revision and proofreading. The writer uses MLA citation correcly.
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Added on 09.02.2015 12:02
Also it looks 3 pages but its double spaced so its like 1 page and a half of something like that. I dont need anything I just need to edit this essay exactly with these instructions and Professors comments.
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