I am aloud to use the same work I submitted and improve on it so please would you be able to improve the work as I really need a good grade to pass this module to progress. I submitted under word count too so I need 2,000-2,5000 words for this essay, I appreciate it a lot. this is the feedback I got from this essay (essay is in the uploads) It is clear that you have read some good material on fake news and the emphasis you place on young people, media education and tax is entirely worthwhile. But your essay feels well under the word limit and you dont cover as much ground as you needed to. Whats also required is a revisiting of the first principles of essay writing. Your essay needs an original title, one that reflects your hypothesis. You also neglected to insert page numbers. Its important to do so. Your bibliography is fine in spots, but this too needs revising. The G in Guardian needs to be capitalised, as does the N in McNair. Your entry for Duffy is incomplete, as is your entry for Waistbord. Your entry for Reboot also looks wrong, with a line from censorship at the bottom. A deeper and more sustained effort is required for written work in semester two. ill put all the materials you would need to read and use. also, there needs to be a bibliography which is leeds-havard referencing. its due at 12pm on Thursday 28th January.
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