The second sentence sounds awkward after you took out the word “you.” *You have included some good examples to discuss the topics, but you need to work on paragraph organization. The first body paragraph includes a couple sentences that don’t relate to the nutritional benefits of breastfeeding. So which is cheaper — breastfeeding or using formula? *You don’t really summarize the content related to the points of comparison/contrast. Part of comparing and contrasting is emphasizing the differences. *Work on sentence structure and wording.Review guidelines for comma use.Proofread carefully to eliminate errors.
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