It should be written as if I could hypothetically conduct a research. The info I used in my actual research at Oglethorpe mall is null in void thats why it not in the 2nd draft. The second document is the one that needs to be rewritten. This is the feed back I got from my professor:
Thanks for the completed update to your research proposal. Based on my review I would suggest:
The proposal must comply with the 7th edition of the APA manual.
I encourage everyone to review the grading rubric for the final research proposal submission.
The assignment required the inclusion of an updated introduction section. I do not see any information within the submitted document
The format of the Method section should follow the demonstrated sections within the video. The current version does not comply with APA format, need to edit
The main issue with the submitted document is the lack of updated introduction. In addition, you need to review the four main section of a method section.
Prof Surrette)
Theses are the youtube videos he wants us to go by
Methods section – https://youtu.be/i4j9ikLHWA8
Results section – https://youtu.be/Hu96posTIFw
discussion Section – https://youtu.be/-E5nqB0ugv4
The research proposal should include the following sections, abstract, literature review with hypothesis, method section, project results, discussion,
references. I added the guide as well
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