Hi Dear
I have about 260 pages thesis that need some editing after i received comments below from my supervisor that must be done please check the comments and give me you price
1- The abstract should be amended to make it clear that the thesis is primarily about E-Learning that takes place on campus, rather than at a distance, and to include a description of the significance of the findings.
2- It is stated that a lot of learning that goes on in KSA is learning by heart or by committing lots of fact to memory, and that independent learning is to be encouraged. This discussion could be made more relevant if some sentences are included to clarify whether ELearning can play a role in encouraging independent learning.
3- Section 2.8 to include the candidates own definition of Elearning as well as a summary and conclusion that covers all sections of Chapter 2.
4- 17. Section 3.10 to include a summary and conclusion that covers all sections of Chapter 3.
5- Please check for grammatical errors and complete a proofread.
6- The abstract requires restructuring, as well as including main contributions.
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