Please see failed essay feedback from previous writer, the lecturer has made very good points about what to change and I have also provided proposal for structure Please see following comments and please follow:Comments “Unfortunately, you have not answered the essay question well and I am unable to pass this assignmentYou have made good general points in the second half of the paper but the first part was not related to the case study adequatelyYou had no introduction to the essay, see my comments in your paperYou did not include any specific legislation or social policies that impact upon the clients in the case study and did not demonstrate analysis of the construction of social problems in social policy and the law, analysis of social work practice within legal and policy contextYou made no mention of the historical context of the issues, or policiesYou could have included:The Universal Declaration of Human Rights (UDHR)Historical legislationThe Immigration Restriction Act, 1901 (Cth) (White Australia Policy) forms a historical backdrop to Australias current immigration policy and attitudesMigration Act, 1958 (Cth) continues the exclusionist ideology, defining boat arrivals as unlawful non-citizens.The Convention Relating to the Status of Refugees 1951,Treaties include the international Covenant on Civil and Political Rights (ICCPR), the international Covenant on Economic, Social and Cultural Rights (ICESCR), the Convention against Torture and Other cruel, Inhuman or Degrading Treatment or Punishment (CAT) and the Convention on the Rights of the Child (CRC).Cultutral issuesAustralias Multicultural Policy 2011 Please ensure you follow the essay instructions in your future submissions and your grade will improve significantly
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