How exactly is each a symbol of by any means necessary?

Dear Writer,

I sent the formal essay to my professor and she send it back to me for a revision along with the following feedback :
Overall, good job here! Your thesis, engaging with Lysistrata and Achilles, is promising. However, I want to push you to be more specific in your thesis. You vaguely refer to each characters gender but do specifically address their similarities and differences. For instance, you write: ” Achilles and Lysistrata as symbols of change by any means necessary. The characters are of different genders, and although they possess exemplary character traits and personalities. How exactly is each a symbol of by any means necessary? Ans define what their exemplary character traits are. Overall, be more specific in articulating your thesis. Ultimately, what is your main point and why should your audience care?

Please review and make changes as needed. Thank you!

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